miércoles, 27 de noviembre de 2013

APA Style in the Review of Deconstructing Digital Natives


The purpose of this paper is to analyze the use of American Psychological Association (APA)  style in the text “Review of Deconstructing Digital Natives” written by Nelson (2012). It describes how in-text citations and the reference list have been used by the author.
As regards in-text citations, quotations have been included several times throughout the article. They are properly introduced by a signal phrase and followed by the page number in parentheses (UMN Center for Writing, n.d.). Some other citations were presented in the form of paraphrasing. Also, one block quotation and an example of personal communication have been properly integrated in the text according to APA conventions. 
The reference list includes the in-text citations in alphabetical order and the author makes a correct use of title-case for names of sources. However, it shows some inconsistencies. It is not presented on a separate sheet and it comes right below the article. Then, the word “References” has been completely capitalized and aligned to the left, instead of being centered. The use of ampersand is the expected one.
In conclusion, the text complies APA requirements. Moreover, the author presents a thorough developed article. A well-balanced use of citations and credits have been achieved.

  


References

Nelson, M.E. (2012).  Review of deconstructing digital natives. Language Learning & Technology, volume 16, number 3 pp. 35-39,fromhttp://llt.msu.edu/issues/october2012/review1.pdf


University of Minnesota Center for Writing. (n.d.). Quicktips: APA documentation style: In-text citations. University of Minnesota: Student Writing Support, from http://writing.umn.edu

lunes, 25 de noviembre de 2013

Annotated Bibliography of Review of Deconstructing Digital Natives


Nelson, M.E. (2012).  Review of Deconstructing Digital Natives. Language Learning & Technology, volume 16, number 3 pp. 35-39,fromhttp://llt.msu.edu/issues/october2012/review1.pdf
The author of this review, Nelson (2012), gives a complete description of the book “Deconstructing Digital Natives” recently edited by Thomas (2011) with the collaboration of several well-recognized authors.  He thoroughly examines the book section by section and chapter by chapter. Nelson attempts to describe how the topic of digital native contraposed to digital immigrant is developed throughout the book. Digital native seems to be a metaphor that exaggerates the gap between adults and young people who are immersed in their world highly defined by digital technologies. He also evaluates the  volume presenting his criticism. Nevertheless, he finally states this should be an interesting book to be read by scholars and teachers as it makes honour to its title and goes beyond metaphors and assumptions about youth, digital technologies and education.

  
  
References


Nelson, M.E. (2012).  Review of deconstructing digital natives. Language Learning & Technology, volume 16, number 3 pp. 35-39,fromhttp://llt.msu.edu/issues/october2012/review1.pdf

The Wikipedia-Writing Project for Developing Academic Literacy Skills


            In her article “Writing for the World: Wikipedia as an Introduction to Academic Writing” Tardy (2010) states that writing academic texts requires the student to conduct research and develop the style and genre of academic discourse.  She suggests that students could compose an article for the web encyclopedia Wikipedia.
            As regards research, students should “evaluate sources in terms of credibility and reliability” (Tardy & Courtney, 2008, as cited in Tardy, 2010). Then, they may need to learn two basic skills such as paraphrasing and summarizing that would enable them to avoid plagiarism. Considering academic style and genre that characterize the discourse community, teachers might help students in developing the genre required to achieve expert level in writing skill.
            She defines the word “wiki” (Tardy 2010, p.13) and accounts for its creation, its significance today and even the criticism it arouses. “Even more importantly, Wikipedia offers an excellent forum for students to begin confronting the challenges of academic writing: research, citation, generic conversations, and style” (Tardy, 2010, p.13). Consequently, students may compose their articles on personal interests and experience. Later, they can upload them to Wikipedia and make them publicly known. The articles should be supported by reliable sources, provided with correct citations and a limited number of words.
            Tardy (2010) considers 8 steps to be carried out for composing the articles properly. First, while examining Wikipedia, students recognize its value as “a collaborative global encyclopedia” and analyze examples of articles guided by a set of questions (Tardy, 2010, p. 14). Second, they might decide on topics for their articles through brainstorming and compile facts. Third, they should start creating an outline for their article. Next, at the drafting stage, they may focus on text composing while using quotations and paraphrasing. After that, peer editing might be advisable, followed by each student dealing with citations of their text. Polishing would be the next step as they tackle the aspects of spelling, vocabulary, grammar and punctuation. Finally, they publish their articles in Wikipedia for a global audience being aware that readers might delete or modify some parts of it.
     In conclusion, composing articles to be published in this worldwide forum may encourage students to grow in the field of academic writing.  In addition to this, students may value the sense of a real audience and their possibility to make their voices be heard by a limitless audience.



References


Tardy, C. M. (2010). Writing for the world: Wikipedia as an Introduction to Academic Writing. English Teaching Forum, 1, pp. 12-19, 27. 


domingo, 24 de noviembre de 2013

American Psychological Association (APA) Style in Academic Writing


            In this paper it is analysed the use of American Psychological Association (APA,  2010)  style for academic writing in an article written by Dalvit, Murray, Terzoli, Zhao and  Mini (2005). It is attempted to analyse deeply how signal phrases, in-text citations and references list were dealt by the mentioned authors.
            First, the authors used signal phrases twice throughout the article and they preferred the signal phrase “According to” (University of Minnesota Center for Writing, n.d.).  Even though they repeated the phrase instead of writing two different ones, they seemed to have made proper use of them as they were followed by the researcher’s surname, the year of publication between parentheses and a comma. As for APA guidelines, page number is not necessary in paraphrasing after a signal phrase but  they decided to include it.
            As regards other in-text citations, paraphrasing was  again the format the authors used (UMN Center for Writing, n.d.).  But this time, they mentioned the sources and the year of publication in parentheses at the end of the sentence. Thus, they cited an author, a dictionary or institutions like Department of Education and Department of Communication or Council of Higher Education.
            Considering short quotations, they did not use them at all while they may have included some as they provided a good argument (UMN for Writing, n.d.). They could have produced a more appropriate  balanced writing with the use of both quotations and paraphrases.
            The references list includes the in-text citations in alphabetical order, makes a proper use of title-case for names of books and internet sources, but it seems to have several inconsistencies. It  comes immediately below the conclusion and not on a separate sheet. The word “References” is aligned to the left while it should have been centered at the top without colon and bold type is not needed. Each entry must have been double-spaced. Besides, they should have used: ampersand before the last author´s name mentioned and not the word “and”, sentence-case for names of titles,  proper title-case for titles of journals and not for titles of articles,  “retrieved” followed by year of publication and “from” before URL address for web sources.
            In conclusion, the text analysed here even though it attempts to follow  APA rules, it does not comply with APA style properly. The most relevant problems could be in the reference section while in the text itself they are considerably less as the authors seemed to follow the APA criteria.

References

Dalvit, L., Murray, S., Terzoli, A., Zhao, X. & Mini, B. (2005). Providing increased access to English L2 students of computer science at South African University. US-China Education Review, Sep. 2005, Vol. 2 (9).

University of Minnesota Center for Writing. (n.d.). Quicktips: APA documentation style: In-text citations. University of Minnesota: Student Writing Support. Retrieved October 2013, from http://writing.umn.edu

University of Minnesota Center for Writing. (n.d.). Quicktips: APA documentation style: In-text quotations from sources. University of Minnesota: Student Writing Support. Retrieved October 2013, from http://writing.umn.edu


jueves, 21 de noviembre de 2013

Discourse Community Characterization


            Discourse community is composed by those people who are interested in language practices and they share the same aims, values, expectations and specific lexis.
            Swales (1990) states six characteristics to define the discourse community. They are described below with supportive evidence from other sources and theorists.

Common Goals: these are the objectives and interests shared by the members.
            According to Hoffman-Kipp, Artiles and Lopez-Torres (2003), teachers interact in activities that are goal-directed through communication and exchange of their own ideas. “Teachers reflection in social context occurs as teachers engage in and share their reflections in diverse ways” (Hoffman-Kipp et al,  2003, p. 4).  Thus, in this goal-directed context teachers collaborate and strategize solutions, rely on their colleagues and other more experienced members.

Participatory Mechanism: information and feedback
            Hoffman-Kipp,  Artiles and Lopez-Torres (2003) state that reflection is present in goal-oriented activities in school cultures through the interaction among colleagues that enables the exchange of ideas (p. 3).
            Wenzlaff (2004) claims that research design consists on data collection, field notes, observation, data organization, memo writing and re-presentation of the data.
Vaugham’s (1988) study found the following:
           Scholarship is the umbrella under which research falls(…) Scholarship results in a product that is shared with others and that is subject to the criticism of individuals qualified to judge the product (cited in Kelly-Kleese, 2004, p.4).
            Other authors such as Hutchings and Schulman (1999) observe three outstanding characteristics of scholarship: “(1) It is public …; (2) it is open to critique and evaluation; and (3) it is relayed in a form on which others can build.” (as cited in Kelly-Kleese, 2004, p.7)

Information Exchange: members of the group stay intercommunicated.
            Wenzlaff (2004) suggests that teachers immersed in a collaborative culture are bound to learn from one another as colleagues. Therefore, this is not a unidirectional phenomenon as “interaction with people in one’s environment are major determinants of both what is learned and how learning takes place” (p. 1). Group work enables promoting positive change and accomplishing tasks. While performing a collaborative planning in their daily work, teachers discuss beliefs and practices (Hoffman-Kipp et al, 2003, p. 3).

Community-Specific Genres: the group uses a common genre.
            Kelly-Kleese (2004) states that within a discourse community people share language practices and develops discourse involving knowledge, common purposes and values (p. 2).
            According to Kelly-Kleese (2001), the community college construct meanings, generate a community language and style (p. 1). From the perspective of developing a collective  identity, teachers strive to acquire and transform a social language, a discourse peculiar to a professional group at a given time (Hoffman–Kipp, 2003, p. 7).

Highly Specialized Terminology: 
            As Kelly-Kleese (2001) explains the discourse community members share understandings about how to communicate and a discourse with a particular style (p. 1). This community adopts language with a specific meaning that does not seem to be applicable to the broader context.

High General Level of Expertise: level of knowledge shared by the group.
            Teachers guide and assist each other while building new ideas and therefore inquiry and deep reflection characterizes their meetings (Hoffman-Kipp et al, 2003, p. 5).  “Understanding the community college as a discourse community would (…) move community college professionals into a position of legitimate power (…) while increasing their esteem within that community” (Kelly-Kleese, 2001, p.4 ).
            Hoffman-Kipp, Artiles and Lopez-Torres (2003) suggest that the shift from assisted to independent use of tools, Vygotsky`s (1978) concept of Zone of Proximal Development, enlist novices to perform the desired practices through writing, speaking or listening as peripheral members, before they become competent in the use of those practices.
            In the light of this characterization of a discourse community, collaborative learning might support teachers to apply this learning in their respective classrooms and therefore improve their practices. This collaborative culture can possibly enhance tolerance of differences, thinking outside the box, rapport, risk-taking and reflection.


References

Hoffman-Kipp, P., Artiles, A. J., & Lopez Torres, L. (2003). Beyond reflection: teacher learning as praxis. Theory into Practice. Retrieved October 2007, from http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0NQM/is_3_42/ai_108442653
Kelly-Kleese, C. (2001). Editor’s choice: An open memo to community college faculty and administrators. Community College Review. Retrieved October 2007, from http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0HCZ/is_1_29/ai_77481463
Kelly-Kleese, C. (2004). UCLA community college review: Community college scholarship and discourse. Community College Review. Retrieved October 2007, from http://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_m0HCZ/is_1_32/ai_n6361541
            Swales, J. M. (1990). Genre analysis: English in academic and research settings. Cambridge, UK: Cambridge University Press.

Wenzlaff, T. L., & Wieseman, K. C. (2004). Teachers need teachers to grow. Teacher Education Quarterly. Retrieved October 2007, fromhttp://findarticles.com/p/articles/mi_qa3960/is_200404/ai_n9349405